Wrote a virtual reality novel "Paradise" with the programmer as the protagonist

I often think, if there is a group of people in the virtual space of the computer, with our aloof, wits, mutual preparedness and longing for each other, seems to be a very cool thing, but also with the sun is not new things of the Earth add a little meaning.
So I came up with an idea, and I wanted to make up a story. The contents include: Their origins, how to the earth, how to interact with humans, the results of interaction.
No experience in writing fiction, only the experience of writing code, so the literature you laughed at more to forgive, but the plot aspects of more comments, because the rhetoric is a matter of writers, I do not care, and yy is the whole thing, but also I as a programmer can not shirk responsibility.
Note: The text relates to some computer and graphics concepts, the programming background, especially the graphic background of people who understand easier, but do not understand it is not serious.
The upper part writes the origin, the lower half writes the things that arrive after Earth.

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Wrote a virtual reality novel "Paradise" with the programmer as the protagonist