Paper rework (response letter) Most useful opening remarks

Paper rework (response letter) Most * * Useful prologue
Original 2015-06-01 Dr. Li Mo Sorrow

Summed up a part of the universal opening, enough to reflect our editorial and reviewer of the magazine's respect.
1, It is with excitement that I resubmit to you a revised version of manuscript "article title" for the "magazine name". Thank giving me the opportunity to revise and resubmit this manuscript. In keeping with my last communication with you, I am resubmitting This revision before the agreed upon deadline, March 16, I appreciate the time and detail provided by each reviewer and by you and has incorporated the suggested changes I Nto the manuscript to the best of my ability. The manuscript have certainly benefited from these insightful revision suggestions. I look forward-working with you and the reviewers-to-move this manuscript closer-publication in the magazine name. (This paragraph of flattery is really long to write, can not suppress the reference)
2. I has responded specifically to each suggestion below, beginning with your own. The changes easier to identify where necessary and I have numbered them.
3, I am pleased to resubmit for publication the revised version of the article in the magazine's number "article title". I appreciated the constructive criticisms of the Associate Editor and the reviewers. I have addressed each of their concerns as outlined below. (This is a simple opening.)
4, sincerest thanks for your response and reviewers comments on our manuscript. We sincerely apologise for the great time it had taken us to respond to these comments (due to force majeaure with first a Uthor), and hope that a revised version of the manuscript would still be considered by magazine name. We have modified the paper in response to the extensive and insightful reviewer comments. We have added additional explanations for non-haematologists and additional table (table 1) to fully address the reviewer ' S comments. Furthermore we have rewritten sections of the manuscript and we hope that this comply with the referee ' s remarks. We'll respond to the comments point counter point. (This is a long time, but also on the rework for too long to apologize)
5, Thank you for reading US manuscript and reviewing it, which would help we improve it to a better scientific level. We revised our manuscript, and quite a lot of changes has taken place. So we had sent the revised manuscript, and a version containing all the changes to be visible.
At the following, the points mentioned by the reviewers would be discussed: (actually I prefer this simple and straightforward opening)
6. The authors would like to thank, the reviewers for their time and their valuable comments. Before addressing each of the comments below, we would like to make a general remark regarding the intent of the Manuscrip T and the choice of the journal.
We chose "XX magazine" because it is a applied journal publishing papers that would help clinical medical physicists perform the IR responsibilities more effectively and efficiently, and for the increased benefit of the patient. We feel that this journal are appropriate for our manuscript so we intend to be a practical paper which are helpful for a Hospital physicist.
We deliberately went into more details in parts of the introduction and the methods sections explaining specifics of CBCT, Since the target audience might not being interested in the more fundamental papers in other journals covering the topic. We obviously need to quote all sources correctly and'll do in the places where we had missed before. (Let me light the blind kiss, want to copy the copy)

7. Please find enclosed the response to the comments of reviewers. The manuscript have been carefully revised in response to the reviewers ' comments and suggestions; Detailed responses to their comments is below. Our reply was in italic font, whereas the reviewers ' specific comments was not italicized. We thank the reviewers for their suggestions, which has significantly improved this m/s.

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