An old man's post-reading experience on Yi Xian

Xiao Ding's "Zhu Xian" has come to an end. Although its plot and settings are not completely complete, it gradually emerges, with a sigh of relief: "vulgar! Vulgar! Vulgar !"

A vulgar: Love is vulgar, so it is a time of life, the love of this younger brother and younger sister qingmei bamboo (Single Love ?), Although people get along with each other for a short period of time, they also learn from the recently popular elements of siblings. However, because "swordsman" is too famous, it is inevitable that people will sit in the seat. Miss Lu, the most beautiful actress in the headquarters, gave her a look at Zhang Xiaofan with a contemptuous look at the beginning. It is estimated that the two will have an ambiguous relationship later...

Vulgar: The description of vulgar, but when a beautiful woman, the skin will inevitably be like snow, slim, beautiful eyebrows, delicate hands such as Jade, although beautiful, but it seems like a model. What's more, even a man cannot be vulgar. There are thousands of romantic people. Why is a good-looking person also saying "Beautiful eyes "? I can't help but think of Princess NASDA in the dark road. When I appear, there are "beautiful" or "beautiful". This... the saying goes well: the first girl is a genius, the second is a mediocre person, and the third is a genius...

Three Customs: vulgar plot, old customers [force free trial] arrived in the New Pan Yuan Yu Jian ton Yu umbrella points Xie hence sent the shortage of zookeeper living in D xunle sent sulton silly enzyme cutting the zookeeper cable zookeeper yundun infiltration min Yimou
Ren ?..

OK. I will read "Xian" Again ^ because I really like it very much. Although it can be described as a new wine in old bottles, Moutai and Erguotou are still available.

From the beginning, I thought Xiao Ding was a talented author. "This article is a wonderful combination of heaven and earth." Xiao Ding's original script is a more scripted one. It is lyrical and confusing, but often lacks the atmosphere. It is like a Hollywood blockbuster. The plot looks good, the characters do not have deep memories. However, relying on his talent, he was born out of a bloody path. Taking the description of banfeng, he became his unique style. Hua Yan and meiwen are popular among many readers. At the time of the dark road, there is also a sense of the plot that drives the main character, or charmon is just an accessory to the establishment of an evil empire. After all, the evil empire will come into being, however, we need a person to continue the plot. In "Zhu Xian", a large number of psychological descriptions make the characters clear, and the plot is second. However, the readability of the two float does not decrease, but tends to become greater, which is admirable. Good text and pen, everyone is fond of reading, just as all men are fond of beauty. No one dared to say that Xiao Ding's pen was not good.

Let's talk about Zhang Xiaofan. This person is actually very interesting: First, we don't know what he looks like. We can also say that we don't know whether it's black or white, handsome or not? How high is it? (For the time being, we only know that it is higher than his sister-in-law and Lin Jing, but we do not know how high the two are.) or, what we know is that the world in the eyes of Zhang Xiaofan, in turn, is missing, he always feels a little regretful. Secondly, he is weak and has a bad temper. This is a bit like Guo Jing of Jin yongbi, But Guo Jing also grew up with the support of the stars, while Zhang Xiaofan's name is ordinary and lonely. The master did not pay attention to him, and the teacher-in-law was just responsible, the younger brother cares about him because of his good heart. The younger sister is especially nice to him because of his poor motherhood. Lin Jing Yu is so close to him because he bears the same blood and blood, and even he is grateful for his kindness, he did it for other purposes. It seems that no one around him is willing to know him and ask him what he wants. Even the big yellow dog looks down on him. It was not until the appearance of Xiao gray and Zeng Shu that some people had an equal relationship with each other. However, Xiao Gray was because of the grace of life-saving, and Zeng Shu was because of Xiao gray, after all, he is still lonely ......

Such a lonely person must be eager to be recognized by others. He also has his self-esteem. Therefore, he tried to make good dishes and wanted to practice his skills. He did not even hesitate to steal the teacher. However, due to the weakness of the past, no one cares about these things, at this time, Zhang Xiaofan is like a clown playing on the stage, but there is no audience. Finally, he entered the top four in the competition, attracting tens of thousands of people's attention. Everyone only saw his good luck and his efforts were never acknowledged. Finally, the author couldn't stand it anymore, and he couldn't bear it anymore. He broke out (there was a process in this outbreak ). His master gradually accepted him, and others began to respect him as a person. He was still the silly Zhang Xiaofan, but no one looked down on him, no one is trying to understand. The routine of this character is a typical concept that people like it in obscurity. It is a great deal, but it must be liked by others. In the world, there are very few people who have always been smooth sailing, and there are many people who have failed to be lonely. However, the author uses a wonderful pen to portray vivid and "vulgar", which does not mean to be mediocre:

"Zhang Xiaofan was stunned for a long time. He turned around only when he heard thunder in his belly, but subconsciously refused to go to the kitchen. Instead, he walked to his room ."

"For a long time, suddenly there was a small voice in the crowd, with a trace of surprise and attention, it seems that he did not believe the tone, said:" back, back to the cangsong Shi Bo, at and at me." "

"Everyone thinks that he just came here to see it. When he thought of it, his heart suddenly burst into anger, just like a fire burning deep in his heart, but in a twinkling of an eye, it vanished. He bowed his head, did not speak, or even blamed his friends, because he found that he thought so too ."

"Zhang Xiaofan stood in the same place and watched all the senior brothers go far away. His heart suddenly felt uncomfortable. He slowly walked to the Red List and read it carefully. "

I like these little details very much. With just a few clicks, an image of self-esteem and inferiority will jump onto the paper. In fact, it is a bit like the feeling of having dinner with two of your friends when you were at school, but not calling you. It's just a bit difficult, but a little bit difficult. People need to be valued by others, and they are also afraid of loneliness. In my opinion, loneliness does not mean loneliness, but the most miserable, but the loneliness in the crowd (with the same feeling, haha ):

"I don't know why, Zhang Xiaofan suddenly felt that everyone in front was so annoying with a kind of smile, and he was a kind of contempt for himself. He stepped onto the platform with an expressionless Face and stood behind him. Everyone was standing on his opposite side. This time, even the old books and books were gone, because he had to try again.

But even if he comes, he should cheer for the brother of the same vein!

Zhang Xiaofan's heart suddenly burst out of an unspeakable loneliness, standing on the high platform, watching countless eyes under the stage, but not even a friend.

For what, for what, always face everyone, even a friend can't see it!

A 16-year-old boy quietly shouted in his heart and reluctantly bit his lips and bowed his head.

......

Black and ugly burning stick slowly vacated and left his palm, emitting a mysterious blue light, although ugly, although weak, but it stood in the middle of the air, in the face of the powerful flame that seems unstoppable and omnipotent in front, it, and its host, have no sense of retreat.

One person, one burning stick, faces the whole world! "

Zhang Xiaofan sometimes can see himself on him, but not so extreme. When we walk alone in the reinforced concrete forest, when we are ignored, when we find that we don't actually know or like it, it may feel like standing on the podium where no one cheers for themselves. However, "Many people say they want others to understand themselves, or they want to know others, but they often cannot understand themselves. Why bother talking about others ?"

Does Zhang Xiaofan know himself? I don't think he is. His life has been on the road set by others until now. All he does is to get others' approval or others' requirements. And sometimes we are not.

By the way, I would like to raise a question. For a young child who has lost his loved ones, it is not normal that Zhang Xiaofan is too light to hate, and even thinks that the old monk is far more than his parents.

In addition, it is temporarily "unmasked", which also affects the fullness of the character image.

However, none of these are the ones that touched me most in all the plots, and Xiao Ding's lyrical techniques are not exhausted:

"The wind and rain roared, the miserable world, this beautiful woman, quietly look at him.

Who's eyes, sad and so miserable, as if the person hurt last night! That kind of pain, deep into the bone marrow, deep soul.

Deep! Deep!

Are you the one who loves others?

Are you sure you want to read him forever?

Zhang Xiaofan suddenly smiled, with a grief and heart, like last night. "

"When Zhang Xiaofan was shocked, he knew that he had already had a lot of trouble for the unknown black rod. If he had to learn the lessons without permission, he could not imagine waiting for his punishment.

However, at this moment, his eyes seem to have floated over Tian Linger: When a teenager, he took himself up the hill to cut bamboo, the gentle appearance beside the light in the rain night, and the laughter and scolding in the past, even the faint fragrance of her body floated in her memory, which is as clear as it is now.

1.1 drops!

He again fell down and bowed his head heavily, but did not say a word. "

A person's specific memories of a person often mean that they cannot be put down or weak, and when you think of another person, it often means that they are irretrievable. So when I described Lu Xueqi and remembered how little Zhang Xiaofan had done in his past, I had already defaulted on their ambiguity. (And I don't think Zhang Xiaofan and Tian linger have real love. I will elaborate on it later .) This is an easy-to-use description. In fact, I want to cry when I see it. Please, I just fell in love. Don't stimulate me, OK? However, there was a figure in my mind that I could not help but read it several times. Now I can almost carry it back. There is no one word to say. Who knows where the moon is still in the past? In my eyes, there are two types of novels due to different souls. One kind of soul is "thinking", which aims to bring the author's world outlook and questions into his work and express a certain purpose, such as "Hundred Years of loneliness" and "Galaxy hero legend; another kind of soul is "Emotion". The core is a "Emotion", that is, to make you feel, whether this emotion is sad, happy or confused. This category of books is far more than the former. Of course, the paths of the second-class books are not very clear and often unclear. "Zhu Xian", I personally think it belongs to the category of "feelings.

Among the many emotions, love is often the top priority. Specifically, in the first part of "Zhu Xian", the core is Zhang Xiaofan, tian ling er, and Lu Xueqi, who calls you not the main character ...). The so-called light, one is that the performance is not strong yet, in fact, the two are more willing to say that the feelings they like are unilateral. For Tian linger and Zhang Xiaofan, I am afraid there is nothing wrong with Zhang Xiaofan. For Tian linger, Zhang Xiaofan has never been considered to be eligible to fall in love with him. In her eyes, Zhang Xiaofan is just a stupid younger brother, a playmate and a protector. She is very nice to Zhang Xiaofan, because she only has this person who can be nice to her, and other people around her are better than her. She also comes out of female motherhood instinct, she has a kind of pity and care for the weak Zhang Xiaofan. If she was still naughty when she was a child, she would make fun of Zhang Xiaofan. Later, she was maintained as much as she was, she has no peers to interact with, so the arrival of Zhang Xiaofan makes her happy, but because of the weakness of the latter, I am afraid Zhang Xiaofan is a bit like a doll. Ling er's loneliness is also one of the reasons why she fell in love with Qi Hao so quickly? In essence, Tian linger never really pays attention to her younger brother. Here is a small detail:

Tian linger said: "I originally thought of providing you with a baby to support the facade, so that you may not go out and get jokes from others.

But these days my mother forced me to practice too hard, and I forgot ."

Later, when Zhang Xiaofan began to be strong, what changes would there be between them when she found that someone was willing to use her life to protect her? We don't know about this, but we can have a glimpse of Panthers:

"In the house, all the people looked at each other and waited for a while. Tian linger slowly walked over and turned his back to the people, raising Zhang Xiaofan. Zhang Xiaofan's mouth was filled with blood and lying in her arms, he smiled.

At that moment, a drop of refreshing tears quietly fell into the pool of blood on his face ."

"At this moment, in her mind, she seems to have vaguely thought of a thought: When did she start to be so gentle with me? "

A woman is a strange animal. Sometimes, the person she does not love but loves her, but is dependent on her life *...

Compared with Tian linger, Lu Xueqi has much less drama points, and his feelings cannot be compared. However, she has an implicit affection for Zhang Xiaofan, which she does not know about, and should be visible to everyone. It is not surprising that Lu Xueqi is the master of the "extinct division too" shuiyue. She has a deep hatred for the apprentice. She looks down upon the man with a higher eye and rejects the man himself. But this kind of person is often the most popular in the cold ice layer. Therefore, Zhang Xiaofan is honest and a little dumb, but he is persistent, competent, and painful (the last moment is soft; fight to block the enemy). The most important thing is that, she's not familiar with John's past scandal... it is normal to get the favor of snow mm. With a sigh, a woman will only like a man she doesn't know... lu's image is actually very traditional and popular. We can see her shadows in many places, but it is also a favorite of many male readers.

Finally, let's talk about Zhang Xiaofan. Who does he love? Many may say Tian linger. But I don't think he loves it!

His feelings for sister-in-law should be the vague feelings of teenage teenagers. In fact, at that time, as long as he is nice to him, not ugly, or salt-free, he can win such feelings, he has no choice either. In the same way, when he finally discovered the feelings of Tian linger and Qi Hao, his heart hurt was actually the heart hurt of our first love. The pain was no less than a real love, but not equal to it. His feelings for Lu Xueqi are nothing more than fear and respect. The man is attracted by a beautiful woman and she is treated as a substitute for her sister-in-law. Zhang Xiaofan's true feelings have not yet begun. We can only wait and see what will happen in the future.

A good novel should not only be its main character, but also its supporting role. It is also the key to directly affecting the quality of the work. Among the many characters in "Zhu Xian", Tian is not always the most distinctive, and he is even far above the main character. On him, we can see many weaknesses: stingy, strong and short, lazy, face-to-face, not handsome. However, the description of success can help us understand it. His weakness is not only annoying, but also makes us feel alive. I asked my wife to give medicine. Because Zhang Xiaofan was angry, Zhang Xiaofan was forced to suffer congestion, and the conversation with Su Ru square was brilliant. From this point, we can deeply understand the progress and style change and completeness of Xiao Ding. In addition, there are a few funny descriptions in "Zhu Xian" that are very warm. Such descriptions are not found in the previous works of Xiao Ding. I personally feel that it can dilute the article's anger and play a neutral role.

However, the scenes in "Zhu Xian" are also very touching. Especially when I first got a paragraph from Qingyun, I couldn't help but think of the Sentence of Le mengtov: "What I wrote is not a novel, but a travel note ." I will not elaborate on the specifics. For details, refer to "Zhu Xian".