About English Corner in Shenzhen

I have tried three English corners in Shenzhen this weekend. one is in Futian building, the other is in Futian Culture Plaza, and the last one is in Shenzhen book town which located opposite Diwang building. I think the one in Shenzhen book town is the best. I feel it is well organized, and there are getting people come here to join in the party. and the organizer has a series program to let vistors talk each other. first, he asked us what happend all the world this week, so we'll answer this question, each person may have a different answer, thus then it will get started answers. after that, he began to talk some important events among them, and made some questions around the events. after showing us each question, he wocould let us to talk each other for practising English, after practising 15 minutes, he wocould go on for next question, so we can have topic to talk about all the time. so I feel it is the best corner I have ever visited. and the on in Futian Culture Plaza, it was organized outdoors, you know, it was very hot these days, the teacher and I wocould not feel comfortable then, and only one foreigner guy sitting there facing to the others guy such as me, further more, there are using kids there, they are all live nearby, so they can came there easily, and the communication way is that all the candidates talk with the only one foreigner, so I don't think it is a good way. and the first one is acturly disappoint me, there are no organizer and nice guys, and then persons wowould begin talk in Chinese, so I think I won; t go there again.

That's all I can say about the English corners I have ever visited in Shenzhen, I'll visit more in the future. if I have found some better place, I'll let you guys know. and I am learning English, so I am trying to write down what I want to say in English, I will be appreciated if anyone can help me to correct the error or give me some suggestiong in what I wrote.

I went to three English corners in Shenzhen this weekend. One is in Futian Tower, the other is in Futian Cultural Square, and the other is in Shenzhen bookstore. I think Shenzhen bookstore is the best because they are well organized and many people participate in it, which is very popular. The organizer has a series of activities for you to chat about. First of all, he will ask everyone what happened this week, and we will think about it, and a lot of answers will come out, and I will tell you in English that this process has practiced English. The organizer will discuss several topics in detail. On each topic, the organizer will raise a few questions about this topic. After talking about each topic, the organizer will give you 15 minutes to discuss each other. This will give you a chance to practice English. So I think this is the best of all the English corners I have ever visited. Because the other two, for example, the Futian Cultural Square, were held outside, while a foreigner was sitting in the middle and people around him, in a way that everyone had a conversation with foreigners in turn, many children living nearby also come, because they all live very close, so there are no central topics throughout the process, mostly idle, but the atmosphere is good, everyone's enthusiasm is good, if you have time, try again. As for another English Corner, because there is no organizer and no topic, some of the team members started to chat in Chinese. It seems very bad and I may not go to this place any more.

This is how I feel when I go to the English Corner this weekend. I will verify more in the future. If I find it better, I will tell you.
I am learning English, so I plan to write it again in English and then in Chinese, I would like to thank anyone who can help me modify the mistakes in this article and provide some better expressions!